Monday 14 October 2013

In The Silence.

In the silence I behold
my thoughts
coming and going
kaleidoscope of colours
dancing and spinning
They are just existing
on their own and I perceive
that they make me
and not I them
They are like currents in a river
that I chose to swim
and seeing it that way
I still like to swim.

6 comments:

  1. "They are like currents in a river" Not thought of it like that but seems appropriate because thoughts often seem to float by. Well done.

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  2. " They are just existing
    on their own and I perceive
    that they make me
    and not I them"

    Love that.

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  3. I enjoy the living quality of thought in your poem! So true that our thoughts make us rather than the other way around.

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  4. "...and I perceive that they make me and not I them" Fantastic. And so true. I really liked this.

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  5. they make me
    and not I them

    loved this line :)

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  6. Exactly .. I like to swim in the silence too ! Rgds, Snlk

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