Monday, 21 October 2013

Seventeen Sylables

I guess, you would have been born into this mess anyway. I am here.
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8 comments:

  1. yikici21 October 2013 at 02:52

    Aww, makes me want to share a hug, nice write.

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  2. Anonymous21 October 2013 at 03:44

    Clever write.

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  3. Shah Wharton21 October 2013 at 04:41

    Aw! X

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  4. Sonalika Chaturvedi21 October 2013 at 05:07

    :) This prompt has got some interesting short formats and lines .. I like this !!

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  5. Ron Potter21 October 2013 at 05:26

    Thank you. I agree, this was an interesting prompt.

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  6. payal agarwal21 October 2013 at 06:40

    :) Lots said in just few words!

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  7. Anna K. Stewart21 October 2013 at 23:45

    Wow...this holds a lot...I'm not sure whether the "I am here" is meant to be a statement of comfort or self-blame...the ambiguity is interesting. I like it!

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  8. Anonymous22 October 2013 at 11:42

    I love the mystery in this short poem.

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