Monday, 14 October 2013

In The Silence.

In the silence I behold
my thoughts
coming and going
kaleidoscope of colours
dancing and spinning
They are just existing
on their own and I perceive
that they make me
and not I them
They are like currents in a river
that I chose to swim
and seeing it that way
I still like to swim.

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6 comments:

  1. Morgan Dragonwillow14 October 2013 at 08:11

    "They are like currents in a river" Not thought of it like that but seems appropriate because thoughts often seem to float by. Well done.

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  2. Anonymous14 October 2013 at 12:56

    " They are just existing
    on their own and I perceive
    that they make me
    and not I them"

    Love that.

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  3. Christine14 October 2013 at 13:00

    I enjoy the living quality of thought in your poem! So true that our thoughts make us rather than the other way around.

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  4. Linda Roy14 October 2013 at 18:57

    "...and I perceive that they make me and not I them" Fantastic. And so true. I really liked this.

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  5. Pratibha15 October 2013 at 06:59

    they make me
    and not I them

    loved this line :)

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  6. Sonalika Chaturvedi15 October 2013 at 14:34

    Exactly .. I like to swim in the silence too ! Rgds, Snlk

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