I Am I am I am
Tell them waiting sitting
I Am for your breathing
sent you return, stilling
into so long my mind
this life. have I
missed you. I am
I am so tired
in love I am let me
with you sleeping sleep on
she said dreaming into
driving and there the dawn.
her van. you are.
I am I am
like you letting
Grumpa the rain
he said fall on
taking my face
my hand.
I am
I am wading
grateful water
today and mud
for all up to
you say. my knees.
Listen
So list was like a lot of different situations with every line and I feel that's right, because so many different experience make an "I" .. really cool !
ReplyDeleteI love the poignancy of some of these stanzas, well written vignettes of the inner and outer life of a poet. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteI am curious about "wading in water and mud up to my knees"... I envision a fly-fisherman there for some reason. I enjoyed these little glimpses.
ReplyDeleteLike the way you lay this out.
ReplyDeleteVery creative take on the prompt. Snippets of loveliness.
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