The stone, with sharp crust
biting my hands.
Lifting it made me
think of you.
Gratitude
for taking me canoeing
on the Black River,
the day after dad's funeral.
I cut my knee
and blood spilled freely.
We kept paddling downstream,
had to walk back to the truck
(or you did).
I stayed and swam
under the bridge.
October warm days,
water out of the rock.
I love your take on the prompt today! I could see the river and feel the rock... great imagery!
ReplyDeleteEven though it has the ideas of a funeral and even personal injury, there is something really comforting here. Lovely poem.
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ReplyDeletebeautiful poem giving thanks and gratitude to someone. Very sweet, and like a little story I could visualize. loved it. thanks!
ReplyDeleteSimple acts of kindness can stay with us for a lifetime, as they should. Loved this. X
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Thank you Shah and Beth. It was a very kind thing for this man to do considering he is a bit of a stone emotionally. Than you for your comments.
DeleteI like the simplicity of it. Lovely. The first and last lines are my favorites...brings it full circle with the rock.
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