Friday 6 December 2013

Genesis Love Song

If I reach beyond the 
borders of self
and fall into your
consciousness,
will I be saved?

If you catch me within
the web of love
and you cannot hold
liberation,
will you be damned?

If we both fall from grace,
becoming one,
where gravity fails
cohesiveness,
will souls be lost?

I don't think so.
Dissolved selves
make the best brine,
preservation
for the new world

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  1. How the language of faith is transformed with this love song! The ending verse made me smile in appreciation -- "dissolved selves/ make the best bring,/ preservation/ for the new world." What a shimmering sense of shared selves and the future unknown. Nicely written.

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  2. "Dissolved souls make the best brine" I love this line. I imagine souls dissolved and combining into one flavoring every thing in life together. Lovely, Ron. xoA

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    1. Oops, I misread, but the idea is the same. Thanks, Ron. xoA

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